I couldn’t keep track of what’s happening

So many spelling mistakes, the author mixed names up. The story jumped from different parts too quickly. The ending wasn’t great either as other characters had more to their stories so it felt very rushed. Please don’t write again ms author lol. Spare us.

The book is all over the place & I was lost one more than one occasion. I wish it was more put together because it was interesting.

There was a lot of grammatical errors and she would mix up the names, besides that I didn’t like the ending

The book itself was pretty interesting, if you can get past all of the grammatical errors and missing words. Despite that, I’d still probably read the second part of the book, if there is one.

The characters made you want to fight them but I couldn’t put the book down!