Not Bad, But Has So Much Potential
4
By Bocarb
Those that said this story was “all sex “ and “no storyline” clearly didn’t read this book and just skimmed it. It is a short story, but full of information that can be missed if you aren’t paying attention. Now, with that said..... this short could have benefitted from having more of a page count to solidify the actions and timeline of the story. But, all in all, it was cute (and of course had its sexy moments).