This tale keeps getting better and better! If only the small errors in grammar and wrong names didn’t pop up here and there. Don’t let them keep you from enjoying everything else about the adventure as it unfolds!

I liked the book. Too many editor mistakes with wrong names being used.

So many typos! Could do with more original chapter endings, after all.. how many times can a chapter end the same way - kyra thinking she’s going to die, or Duncan thinking “this is the end” or Alec thinking “this is it”, or merk thinking “im dead now”....

Good book, but sooo many typos! Did this even go through an editor? Seems to be getting worse as the books go on, just finished this, the 3rd in the series and am debating on even continuing to the end

The author continues with her goal of killing everyone off, for nothing other than moving the plot along. For only in great misery comes great strength, or some such balderdash Doesn’t explain the goals of the bad guys other than saying they want to kill everything. Even our Heroes are at their end at the concluding chapter of this book, being stabbed, betrayed, facing impossible odds, or otherwise driven to despair. Cliff hangers to the max...

I loved the last two books but there are many points of views to keep up with, and they are just getting boring.

Your books are well written. The only problem I have is that every page, every chapter, is the same. The group or the person is always in great peril about to die and than Leo saves the day for Kyra, or in the case of her father he always finds a way through because of his amazing character or stroke of luck after stumbling into a worsening scenario. It's repetitive and it gets boring. It would be much better to introduce character building like there was in book 2 with Merk and the boys from the flames(that's how much I remember them) internal conflict with how kyra feels about the pan designs would do wonders to the plot elements, and if the pandesians have armies of slaves, what do they think of themselves? Also, you should add a little bit more about the trolls in future, in the event of a genius villain it greatly builds plot if you follow him and allude to different sets of plans that he could put under way to endanger the group.

Why do the prices get higher for each book with less pages? 4.99 for 250 pages is just bull and overpriced. Stop being greedy and lower it to at least correspond to the number of pages. Like the book, hate the price.

I read the first three and I won't be buying the rest only due to the shallow characters and the plot going from we can win anything no matter what to we are dumb and lose it all because reasons. I just skimmed the chapters in this book and I don't feel like I missed anything. The female lead is an idiot, there is living with honor and then there is being intelligent and strategic. This is too bad because I was hoping as the story progressed it would improve but it got worse.

A very captivating book!