the writing style is painful to try to read.

Wonderful read

What a fun read. Endearing characters, lots of action and mystery. I really enjoyed this fun book.

Loved this book one of the best I’ve read in a while it’s not just a story it really makes you think and contemplate. I’m not gonna say that sometimes i wasn’t a little lost with the explanations of magic but once i took and extra few minutes it became clear and quite honestly props to the author for coming up with such an original explanation and story. And i throughly loved how the author took her time telling this story it wasn’t a jumbled mess . Great plot, story line a characters i can’t wait to lean more about them and see how Ebony continues to grow ! Definitely read this book!!!! I can’t wait to read the rest ,Thank you to the author!!

Interesting characters, original plot. I really enjoyed

An interesting story and a mystery still in progress. Meet Ebony Bell and Nate Wall. Yes, there are other characters but these are the main ones. The story was interesting but I found Ebony too whiny. I would have thought her a more alpha female but she was not. What is happening in the Vale is a interesting concept but I do not like weak characters and Eb was weakish. You might enjoy the book but this is the end for me.

Sentence structure D- Grammar F+ Plot Incomplete Character Depth Missing Recommendation: 1) Read your own work before you comdemn us 2) Dictionaries are your friends 3) Thesaurus is also a reference

Very unique, and an interesting twist on the "typical" witch story line.

I love this book, can't wait to start on book 2 ;)

Like the content, but hire a proofreader. I would guess there is a typo or omitted word at LEAST every other paragraph in this series, and sometimes more than one in a sentence.