Wouldn’t read again
3
By BLD3612
The story was good, but there were 2 problems for me. 1. The writing came off as if a middle schooler wrote it. The dialogue sounded like young kids talking to each other instead of college students. 2. There are so many spelling mistakes, words omitted, and words in the wrong place in sentences. You have to go back and reread sentences to figure out what it’s supposed to say.
