Love this author the plot was good a little slow in beginning but good. Thanks k

I liked the story and I liked the characters and their unusual abilities. As an Autistic person I like seeing others with different characteristics succeed. Just would start to really get into the story and then find mistakes and misspelled words. Great stories just need some proof reading. Thank you

Thought it was a great story but there were so many errors in grammar throughout that it was distracting, think you should have better proofreaders!

The book itself was fine. However, the number of spelling and grammatical errors detracted from the enjoyment of reading this book.

Great characters and a page turner. Several grammatical, spelling, and punctuation errors, but still a good read. Will download the next book in the series

The story kept me interested, but you need to hire a better proof reader; the spelling errors and repeat lines were really distracting when I had to reread something to understand what was meant. This book was the first one of Molly Black’s that I had any problems with.

It is a good book, but there were a ridiculous number of misspellings! I’m a retired English teacher, but even my students wouldn’t have this many very careless mistakes!!!

It was ok story, but typos and poor grammar were everywhere. Poor editing and proofreading.

The story was good, but I was so distracted by the typos I couldn’t enjoy it. I lost count of the number of errors I saw, everything from misspelled words to calling a main character Jack instead of Jake. Need to proofread!

It’d be so much better if somebody actually proofread the book. The number of mistakes on every page almost made me stop reading it. The plot itself was good though.