Interesting story and characters… Considering that many of your characters are well-educated, they would not make the grammatical errors that you attribute to them. These mistakes interrupt the flow of the action.

Juliette at her best. Fletcher and Olivia try fighting the budding romance building between them until the chemistry explodes. Undeniably hot, steamy, passionate sex. They are two adults trying to keep their sex life under wraps until everything explodes.

I would have given it 5 stars, but the editing missed several errors in the text. It is like the proof reading was done in a hurry.