I’m sorry but police and an FBI duo don’t think of checking cameras even when the victim was a missing person for over a week? Sometimes writers make some people seem stupid when they are not supposed to be stupid professionals.

The book is very good to read

The book is very good to read

Too many grammatical errors, misuse of pronouns and prepositions. Some chapters were so bad that it became almost impossible to concentrate on the storyline. Is there an editor? Too predictable, always the same scenario.

I have really enjoyed the first two books, but the worry I’m not good enough, the constant wording to set up the psychological impact is just too much. Trust your reader more, we get those things. Let the relationship between the agents evolve, they together are the best part of the series. And don’t forget about John… he’s way too understanding and needs to be a bigger part of her focus. Otherwise, I really like the story lines.

Fantastic a must read. Can’t wait for next in series! Just seems to long to wait!