It. Makes you think. What. Happened to. Her father. And. Was. The. Next. Page 🤔😦😤😤

Not a terrible short read by any means, but couldn’t help but notice the writing is very very choppy, jumping from sentence to sentence and not smooth flowing. A somewhat interesting concept for a story.

I liked all of what I read but I only got to the part where Ava murdered her father and it ended and I really wanted more

This was really good. I’m 74 and probably not the age reader that the author writes for but I really enjoyed this.

I liked it

I was expecting a horror theme instead it was sad, but really good

This book was so amazing you should make another one.

There’s one review that says awful. Don’t listen to it. I respect opinions but if you like horror books not to scary with slight cursing, THUS IS FIR U MY FRIEND

Do not recommend.

It’s very good writing and extremely interesting, you can feel the emotion and see the rooms and people from the descriptions, only problem is how short it is. Big recommend for anyone looking for a short story before bed