The plot, with its twists and turns, kept me interested. However, for me the editing, character development and dialog left a lot of room for improvement. It was hard to relate to Madison. At one point there was a paragraph in the first person, then it switched back to third person narrative. I read the prequel and found the same issue, terrific plot, but lacking in meaningful emotions and dialog and character development. It reminded me of a B movie.

If you can’t say something nice, don’t say anything at all. So sorry - I stuck with it until the end. Characters never really develop, ALL are negative personalities, dialogue is lame, Maddy is harsh, bullying to a boring, ever predictable degree.

Well thought out plot and good character definition although Det. Knight is the lead the author doesn’t show her partner Det. Grant much in the way of respect though she states he’s like a brother to her. If the rolls were reversed people would be screaming discrimination. As partners you would think they would have a greater understanding of each other’s strengths rather than her running roughshod over him constantly. It doesn’t show a cohesive relationship most of the time. And her main cop obsessing over a failed relationship for 20years doesn’t show her as mentally capable of being able to see the bigger picture like she’s able on her cases. One doesn’t coincide with the other. But then I can’t write so what do I know. I did enjoy the book in-spite of my in put.

I love Arnold! Another whodunnit with a twist at the end! Stayed up late with this one.

I love to read, and when a book grabs me, I have a difficult time putting it down and often read for hours. This is not that book. The plot was fine, but the characters were not likable. I found the main character, Madison Knight, to be obnoxious and boring. There was nothing about her that was appealing. Her partner, Terry, was just as unappealing. The two of them had the most stilted conversations and showed no connection to each other. In addition, there were a number of typos and other errors. I wish I could say nicer things, but I can’t do it.

I finished my 1st Carolyn Arnold this morning. Now, here it is WAY past my bedtime & I’ve just finished my 2nd Carolyn Arnold book. It was just too good to put down. Now I can barely wait to read the next one!

Great book. Easy to read with a nice plot that isn't obvious.

Excellent police procedural book. Captures the life on and off duty of police officers really well, I say this as a former police officer of 21 years. Do yourself a favor and read this book.

Loved the book. Usually I figure who did it but not this book. Good job. Can’t wait to read my on your books. And will recommend then to everyone.

Great read! Fast paced with good characterization.