I love a good billionaire story, but this one had too many writing mistakes. And I’m not even talking about typos really. I’m talking about poor structure and stiff dialogue. This author needs a serious editor. Also, visiting Oregon from Vegas would mean making a trip UP, not down. Simple mistakes like that are distracting. I don’t need perfect grammatical structure, but so many of the sentences were so awkwardly constructed that I had to stop reading.