The story itself was good but too many grammatical errors that any new editor could easily pick up on.

Author clearly doesn’t understand how veterinary programs (post-grad professional programs) work. Better yet, the author seems to now know how universities and farms work. The book is impossible to enjoy with these glaring misrepresentations. It is also clear that very little research was done. There are plenty of times land management systems were inaccurately or over-described when a descriptive but technically accurate term is available (rotational grazing for example). Highly disappointing.

Rather disjointed. Reminded me of a first draft. A lot of grammar mistakes - words left out of incomplete or used incorrectly. Example: uses “reigns” (ruling a kingdom) instead of “reins” (attached to bridle to control a horse). Couldn’t finish. Too annoying.

As another review said, an editor is needed. There are frequent grammatical errors.

I really enjoyed the writing, but the author needs an editor. I loved the story too, but the jump to the characters being in love wasn’t totally believable to me.