Although I enjoyed the characters of the story and did finish the book, I couldn’t believe how many grammatical errors this book had. I had to re read a bunch because it was poorly written and not grammatically correct. More than once when referring to Brady during an exchange between him and Grant the writer said Grant when it was clearly supposed to be Brady they were referring to. I am glad this was a free book and not one I actually purchased. Author should consider a different editor if they actually use one because this book needed some editing.

Storyline would have been good if you didn’t have to reread some paragraphs over to decipher what was happening.

I don’t know why the name of this Book is Beautiful Seal. I was very disappointed that it only mentioned Grant being a Seal in maybe 3 sentences. And the fact that they ate Pizza or Mac n Cheese for almost every meal made me think they were kids. Very disappointing and I feel like this could have been a lot better with a little work. My opinion.

Lot’s of misspelled and missing words.

Intriguing book. Enjoy it. Don’t understand why more wasn’t said about him being a seal. He should be proud. God bless our military

It needs work. If the male lead’s brother owns a ranch, why does it appear he lives right next to the female lead? Why does the friend just always appear? The way the story was written leaves me with questions. I suggest getting an editor to help.

Just awful.

I had to give it one star so I could rate it and that was one too many. The storyline is unrealistic along with being very slow and boring. The characters have no depth and come across as pathetic. Don’t even get me stated on the typos. It made it even harder to read and follow the storyline. Save yourselves and DO NOT read this book!!!!!