The story has a good plot. However, Victoria is a little whiny. Like Elle in the first series, Victoria is constantly running away. She tells Andrew that she’ll stay and then when his back is turned, she runs. This author needs to give her female leads some grit and determination! They are a little spineless, so it makes them hard to like and hard to root for. If I were Andrew, after the third time she refused him and ran, I would have let her go! Buh-bye!