Decided to read as it was free. Only one review to go by, which talked about the character going by a nickname and then being called Melissa and Melanie both in the book. It was confusing. This whole book needs to be edited as it was distracting. The storyline had some great parts, but some really blah predicted parts as well. Just not enough substance or intrigue to make me want to read the sequel.

I was completely dumbstruck at that... How was it missed that her name was Melissa?? You substitute 'Mel' for so long you just......??? Forget? Good read, that just bothered me a little more than it probably should have.