Kept me interest but someone needs to proof read this book. Sometime the author wrote Tina when she meant Tracy. Some of the sentences had double words in them.

This is the most boring and uninteresting book I have ever read. So many grammatical mistakes, wrongful punctuations and full of unnecessary repetitions and details. I actually had to skip reading some of these unnecessary details as I read. To write a very captivating crime story, I think you need to do an intensive research and know much about how the FBI operates. Also, I don’t think such a smart girl should be dating such a naive, possessive and insecure boyfriend. This book exposes the amateurism of the writer. Even the romantic aspect the writer wanted to portray could not be felt. With a good research, editing and proofreading, this book could have been written 100 pages less and would have made a good read.

This book was difficult to put down once I started reading. I had wished at the end, that the main character had decided to stay ..... Anyway, many times in the book, names were mixed up. Need better editor, proofreading skills needed. Otherwise, I liked the book.

I didn’t like this book. The plot was too see through, the characters were unbelievable, and the writing was tedious, with way too many details repeated too often about profiling.

Not only does this author know how to keep you turning pages but also can keep you guessing and looking into the characters to try and solve the mystery. A good author I recommend. I look forward to reading the next in this series

This was a thrill to read... many twists and turns... I only have a few suggestions... proofread before releasing a book.. I found many mistakes and repeated pages... but other then that this was a great read..can’t wait to start the next one.

I really enjoyed this book. I have never read anything by this author before but she is now going on my must read list! Very well written, held my interest and I couldn’t wait to see how it ended!!

Major grammatical errors and spelling errors! Not to mention mixing up character names. These mistakes made book hard to follow at times. The plot was clearly written by an amateur and did not read easily as there was not a consistent flow. My advice skip this read as I struggled to get thru it but y frustration just encouraged me to write this review. A definite must not read!

Nice steady read!!!!

It wasn’t my favorite book, and let me fell you I’ll read about any book, but I just didn’t like it that much. I see all these complaints about the writing but you do have to realize this is free of charge so there not a multi million dollar good company.